Fic Commentary meme - Coming Home

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sg_betty asked about Coming Home and gave the option of doing a commentary or doing a meta. I chose to do a commentary. Since it's a long, long story I'm posting it at Dreamwidth where it can all go in one post.

It's kind of an interesting exercise to go through these. Seeing what doesn't work as well as you thought it did. Seeing what does. Finding the typos that you didn't see the other 200 times you read the story.

Babbling ahoy here

(and now with tags fixed. Things were a little bold there for awhile. *ahem*)

Comments

[sg-betty.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the commentary! Responded on Dreamwidth... :)