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[smg01]

Have others seen this? This post was linked in a community where I lurk. It's quite a "how not to write" sample.

Edit: as pointed out in the comments, not entirely work safe.

Comments

[aurora-novarum.livejournal.com]

Oh.My.God. It's a test of how many similes can I fit in one paragraphy. Bonus points if none of them make sense!

(P.S. you should warn that's not worksafe.)

[suzannemarie.livejournal.com]

Good point. I have such a relaxed work environment that I don't always think of those things.

It's like he had a thesaurus by his side and was determined to use every as many words from it as he could.

[sg-betty.livejournal.com]

Fantastic icon, Aurora! And perfect for this!

[aurora-novarum.livejournal.com]

Yes, it's scary how often I get to use this icon. Hee. But I can't take credit for it. I just grabbed it from annerbhp

[sg-betty.livejournal.com]

Wow! That's beyond awful! And astonishing! Not only did the author think it was a good idea to write it, but it got past the proof reader and the publisher. What the heck? How does that happen?

[themusesbitch.livejournal.com]

Did. You. SEE. The. FANART?!!!!

[suzannemarie.livejournal.com]

I... have now. The more I study it, the more fascinating and amusing it becomes.

[jungleeyedgirl.livejournal.com]

Ow.

[adrililith.livejournal.com]

OMJ. But I agree, the more I read, the more fascinated I became with it. In a train wreck sort of way. OMJ.

[suzannemarie.livejournal.com]

One begins to wonder if the whole thing was the result of some sort of bet.